Tuesday, January 13, 2009

My Author/Agent Revision Process

I was asked recently (by Sus aka Gottawrite Girl) how my agent and I work together to revise my manuscripts. We both agreed that we love to hear all the different ways authors and their agents work together. 

So far, Agent Ted and I have worked on two manuscripts together. One being my first contracted YA novel, and the other being my MG mystery (that is hopefully going to go out to editors soon). I've come to the conclusion that I will never EVER pass to him a complete manuscript that needs little to no revisions before an editor looks it over.

Ted is the best kind of agent. He sees the strengths of my writing, and asks for me to give him more. He doesn't just say, "Yeah, this is really good. Let's see what an editor thinks now." He works with me on everything from tightening the plot, to developing characters just a little bit more, to developing an satisfying ending. He doesn't want to send out my work to editors and risk getting rejected because a character's motivations were weak, or because the resolution at the end was shaky. 

With EVERLASTING, we went back and forth for 6 solid months before we both finally agreed the novel shined. A week after it went out to editors, we had mega interest, lots of offers, and ultimately, an auction ending up in a six-figure deal. I have no doubt that those results would not have occurred without tireless revisions.

After a multiple page revision letter addressing very specifics requests, Ted made notes inside each version of the manuscript we worked on, asking questions that helped me narrow in on a problem. Mostly, the romance aspect was severely lacking and I had a very, VERY difficult time injecting the kind of lusty romance he knew would make it sell fast and hot. Now, of course, I'm hooked on romance :-)

Anyway, that's my agent/author revision story. Thanks for asking, Sus!

Sunday, January 11, 2009

The revelation has hit!

I've been patiently waiting for the revelation for Book #2 to smack me upside the head--the revelation that would tell me what my novel is lacking and the story line that will allow me to really fall in LOVE with it. 

It arrived this morning while drinking my first cup of coffee. Bam! It jumped out from behind the giant block of self-doubt and angst I'd developed, laughing and pointing at me. "You're soooooo slow!" the revelation said, choking on its giggles. Yeah, yeah. I know. 


Thursday, January 1, 2009

And the Winner Is....

ANGELA CERRITO! 

Congratulations, you are the proud new owner of BURIED by Robin Merrow MacCready! 

Send me your mailing information and I'll get that out to you ASAP. I think you'll love it!